Question

12．万水河坐落在我校东边．夏季已纪来临，为了同学们的安全考虑，请就万水河游览安全问题写一则具有警告和号召作用的文章．这篇文章将被刊登在我校英语报Superview 上．
内容包括：
1．禁止垂钓
2．禁止游泳
3．禁止乱扔垃圾
4．你个人的建议
注意：
1．字数110左右．
2．文章开头已给出，不计入总数．
3．可适当添加细节，使行文连贯．
提示词：Wanshui River．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To begin with，out of safety，going fishing is forbidden，because chances are that you may fall into the water and drowned
高分句型二：
Personally，you can sit on the bench along the river bank，enjoying the scenery．
句型一 ①going fishing is forbidden 该句主语为动名词短语作主语，此时应注意谓语应该用单数
           ②because chances are that you may fall into the water and drowned 该句是一个由because引导的原因状语从句，且句中有一个chance are that固定用法，意为：可能．．
句型二 enjoying the scenery 该部分是现在分词在句中作伴随状语
此外还有以下高级词汇和重要短语：to begin with   more and more..

解答 With summer approaching，the Wanshui River，located to the east of our school，is becoming more and more beautiful．At the same time，many students are attracted by its beauty．While you visit the river，the following must be followed．（提出活动方案）
   To begin with，out of safety，going fishing is forbidden，because chances are that you may fall into the water and drowned．（高分句型一） Besides，you mustn't swim in the river．The reason is that the water is not quite clean．Consideering picturesque scenery，please don't litter．（禁止事项）Personally，you can sit on the bench along the river bank，enjoying the scenery．（高分句型二）Additionally，taking pictures is a good choice．（提出建议）
   I hope that with our joint efforts we can build up a pleasant environment．

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．