Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语，希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。请你根据以下内容，给他回复邮件。

推荐网站：www.edchinese.com

网站内容：

1. 网络课程：中文情景对话、中国风俗、中文电影、中文歌曲、成语和唐诗等；

2. 有在线教师答疑解惑。

注意： 1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Edward,

I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend www. edchinese.com to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Edward,

I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend www.edchinese.com to you. It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.

Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Through these courses, you will have a good understanding of the Chinese language as well as its culture. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all this is free of charge.

I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.

Wish you a happy learning time!

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：题干给出背景：你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语，希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。文章要求给他回封邮件，给他推荐网站www.edchinese.com，并向他介绍网站的内容以及优点。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：写作背景（知道他在学习汉语很高兴，很乐意给他推荐网站）；第二段：推荐此网站的理由（用Firstly, Besides，More importantly使这部分层次清晰）；第三部分：结束语（希望网站对他有帮助并给他鼓励）。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：多次使用定语从句It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.；More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. ；宾语从句I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.。2.使用了过渡词语：Firstly, Besides，More importantly等。3.使用了重要短语：a variety of各种各样的；as well as以及；turn to for help求助；free of charge免费。