Question

1．鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一．它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作．但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响．请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文．

鼠标的必要性	对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪…
鼠标的便捷性	点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除…	编辑文本，搜索信息…
		收发邮件，选购商品…
		点播音乐，下载电影…
如果过分依赖鼠标…（请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点）

注意：
1 对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译．
2 词数150左右．开头已经写好，不计人总词数．
3作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名．
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．

Answer 1

分析 本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可．文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确．
亮点部分  For most people，it's almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse，let alone surf the Internet．（高分句型一）句中it 为形式主语，to do不定式为真正的主语，let alone意为"更不必说"
With the functions of inserting，deleting，moving and copying，it enables us to edit test，browse web page and download what we want．（高分句型二）句中what为宾语从句
Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically．（高分句型三）句中Relying too much on mouse clicking 为动名词作主语

解答 The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer．
     For most people，it's almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse，let alone surf the Internet．（高分句型一）A well-chosen mouse is really handy，flexible and convenient in controlling the screen．With the functions of inserting，deleting，moving and copying，it enables us to edit test，browse web page and download what we want．（高分句型二）It can even bring us a flood of music，movies and PC games．Just imagine，all this can be done with a cute mouse．（鼠标的必要性）
     A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier，but it doesn't always help in a positive way．Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing．Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth．Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically．（高分句型三）（鼠标的便捷性）（153 words）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．