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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My village lie in the mountains in southwest China. Although the climate and landscape are pleased, people lead a tough life there. At the beginning of the 21stcentury, the government began to attach great importance to its development, under the influence of that, people’s living condition began to improve. A lot of roads were built and plenty of trade centers were newly found, which made them convenient to develop economy. What’s more, great many students were admitted into famous universities. In a word, thank to the government’s support, great changes have been taken place in the past few years. My village takes up a new look now.

Answer 1

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【解析】本文主要讲了作者的家乡，在政府的帮助下，呈现出了欣欣向荣的新的景象。

考查时态。表示主语现在的状态，用一般现在时，且主语My village是第三人称单数，所以谓语动词用单数，lie改成lies。

考查形容词。尽管那里的气候和风景都非常的令人愉快的，但是那里的人们却过着艰难的生活。作are之后的表语，用形容词，且表示“令人愉快的”，所以pleased改成pleasant。

考查定语从句。under the influence of which, people’s living condition began to improve.是一个介词+关系代词引导的定语从句，修饰整个主句内容，指物，只能用which，所以that改成which。

考查名词单复数。句意为人们的生活状况开始改善。“生活状况”是复数意义，用名词复数，所以condition改成 conditions。

考查语态。“贸易中心”和“建立”之间是被动关系，用被动语态，所以found改成founded。

考查代词。指代前面的“我的村庄”，所以them改成it。

考查固定短语。a great many很多，许多，是固定短语，所以great前面加a。

考查固定短语。thanks to由于，幸亏， 是固定短语，所以thank改成thanks。

考查语态。“巨大的变化”和“发生”之间是主动关系，用主动语态，所以删除been。

考查固定短语。句意为现在我的村庄呈现出了新的景象。take on呈现，是固定短语，所以up改成on。