Question

现在大部分中学生没有足够的时间享受快乐假期。
请根据要点提示写一篇80-100词的短文。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点提示：1. 中学生要上各种补习班；
2. 家长认为学生应该把更多的时间用在学习上；
3. 你的想法和建议。
Nowdays, few middle school students can fully enjoy their holidays ______________________

Answer 1

 
One possible version:
Nowdays, few middle school students can fully enjoy their holidays.
Parents believe the more time children spend on books, the better they will do at school. So they ask them to attend different kinds of extra classes.
In my opinion, students should take enough rest, and make better use of their holidays to practise their hobbies.
As we all know, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Although the knowledge in textbooks is important, it is not enough. Students also need to learn some useful things outside school.
In a word, it is necessary for students to have enough free time.

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，所以要用一般现在时。要求让你针对中学生要上各种补习班，家长认为学生应该把更多的时间用在学习上等谈谈你的想法和建议。因此本文 不止用一种人称。还应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。还需要注意字数要求。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如make better use of，need to; 还运用了the more, the more句式; 和All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.名句。并注意了句子的衔接如：In  my opinion，In a word等等。