Question

短文写作

某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”，现向全球征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I Want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。

注意：1．根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯；

2．词数：120左右。

I Want to Smile

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Answer 1

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解析：

评分原则： 　　1、主要结构正确、用给定的英语词完整表达所给的汉语信息，给满分； 　　2、未用给定词不给分； 　　3、主要结构不正确不给分； 　　4、主要结构正确，信息完整，但一个或一个以上拼写错误扣0．5分； 　　5、主要结构正确，信息有遗漏扣0．5分； 　　6、主要结构正确，添加无关信息扣0．5分； 　　7、其它可以接受的可能答案。 　　书面表达： I Want to Smile 　　There are many advantages of smiling．It can not only make us happy, but also please others．If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return．So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible． 　　First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and taken all the trouble to bring me up．They arrange almost everything for me．With their help, I have made great progress．I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile．Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life． 　　In a word, let's greet every day with a smile．Tomorrow is another day．