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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Sam went to the cinema the other night. Entered the cinema, he thought of taking off his coat. But the cinema was very cold and he has to keep his coat on. As there weren’t much space between the rows, his legs began to ache shortly after he took up his seat. Worse still, they found it difficult to breath easily. Looking around, he saw a lot of people smoking. At last the film started. That made him angry was that the person in front was wearing so big hat that he could hardly see the screen. To top it all, people all around him either told jokes nor laughed loudly. However, Sam missed most of the dialogue.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】Entered→Entering

【2】has→had

【3】weren’t→ wasn’t

【4】去掉up

【5】they→he

【6】breath→breathe

【7】That→What

【8】hat前加a

【9】nor→or

【10】However → Therefore / So

【解析】

试题分析：通过改错的短文，考查学生对固定搭配，动词时态和语态，名词的单复数问题等。

【1】Entered→Entering 考查现在分词。Enter和he之间是主动关系，所以这里需用现在分词。

【2】has→had考查时态。该句时态为一般过去时，所以这里动词需用过去式，故将has改为had。

【3】weren’t→ wasn’t考查there be句型。该句为there be句型，be动词的单复数取决于其后的名词的单复数，这里much space为不可数名词，所以这里be动词需用单数形式。

【4】去掉up考查短语。take one’s seat坐下，为固定短语，所以这里需将up去掉。

【5】they→he考查代词。由前文的he可知，这里指的是他感觉到呼吸困难，所以需改为he。

【6】breath→breathe考查动词。Breath为名词，这里需改为动词breathe。

【7】That→What考查关系词。这里that不能引导主语从句.需用what做双重身份。

【8】hat前加a考查短语。So +形容词+冠词+名词，这里hat为单数形式，所以需用冠词a。

【9】nor→or 考查短语。Either……or或者……，两者之一，为固定搭配，所以需将nor改为or。

【10】However → Therefore / So考查连词。这里的意思是周围的人们或者讲笑话，或者大声笑，所以他错过了很多对话，这里是因果关系however然而，表示转折关系，故改为therefore/so。