Question

假如你是李明，你的班里来了一位英国交换生Paul。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大。请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。主要包括以下内容：
1．请求老师和同学的帮助。
2．不要总想着考试成绩，要多想自己的进步。
3．多进行体育运动。
4．……。
注意：1. 词数：120字左右；
2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
Dear Paul,
I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.  ______________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely                                                                              Li Ming

Answer 1

不唯一
Dear Paul,
I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.I suggest you communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them.You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time,which only makes you more stressed out.Instead,you should think about the progress you have made in your study,which will surely increase your own confidence.In addition,I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress,because sports will also help you sleep better at night.As for me,I would like to listen to classic music if I have time.
I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.
Yours sincerely                                                                               Li Ming

解析试题分析：先读提示，要点与格式要弄清；时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致，结构搭配莫违背；文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视。学生在明确目的和掌握要领后，要严格按照规定的时间去完成作文训练任务。最后要检查（1）要点是否齐全，有无遗漏。（2）内容是否连贯，有无缺词。（3）语法是否正确，人称、时态、语态、名词单复数等有无错误。（4）用词是否得当，有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误。
考点：提纲作文。
点评：好作文应该是紧扣文章主题，遵循书信格式，选用恰当的语言合理组织文章结构，内容统一、连贯，语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当。为了避免太多单词拼写错误，语法错误，不要为了追求词语的华丽而堆积一些自己也没把握的单词，不要刻意追求长句而写一些自己不知对错的有多个从句组成的长句。考试时最好选择自己最有把握的词汇，短语，句式。