Question

7．假如你是中学生李明，你有留学美国一年的经历．近日你的好友李华来信说她即将留学美国一年，向你咨询留学经验．请根据下列要点给她写封回信，提出你的建议．
字数：100词左右．
要求：（1）多练习英语口语；
（2）上课时多参与课堂讨论；
（3）与寄宿家庭关系融洽
（4）多参与社区志愿者活动．
Dear Li Hua，
I'm glad to hear that you are going to study in America for a year．To make your life in America a rewarding experience，I would like to share some useful tips with you．（高分句型一）
First of all，you need to practice your oral English so that you will have less trouble talking with the local people．（高分句型二）Secondly，you are encouraged to be active in class discussion so that you can develop your own idea on certain topics．Thirdly，when you stay with a host family，do your best to get along well with them by helping them with chores and so on．（高分句型三）More importantly，you can benefit greatly from your volunteering activities in your community．
I hope you will have a good time in America．
Yours，
LiMing．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你有留学美国一年的经历．近日你的好友李华来信说她即将留学美国一年，向你咨询留学经验．请根据下列要点给她写封回信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：：（1）多练习英语口语；（2）上课时多参与课堂讨论；（3）与寄宿家庭关系融洽（4）多参与社区志愿者活动．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：First of all首先；have trouble （in） doing sth在做…方面有困难；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；get along well with与…相处的好；More importantly更重要的是；benefit from从…中受益；have a good time过得愉快；
To make your life in America a rewarding experience，I would like to share some useful tips with you．（高分句型一）
First of all，you need to practice your oral English so that you will have less trouble talking with the local people．（高分句型二）
Thirdly，when you stay with a host family，do your best to get along well with them by helping them with chores and so on．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Li Hua，
       I'm glad to hear that you are going to study in America for a year．To make your life in America a rewarding experience，I would like to share some useful tips with you．（高分句型一）
       First of all，you need to practice your oral English so that you will have less trouble talking with the local people．（高分句型二）Secondly，you are encouraged to be active in class discussion so that you can develop your own idea on certain topics．Thirdly，when you stay with a host family，do your best to get along well with them by helping them with chores and so on．（高分句型三）More importantly，you can benefit greatly from your volunteering activities in your community．
       I hope you will have a good time in America．
                                                                                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Ming

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．