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18．假如你是宁德市某中学的一名学生，为了结合你校开展的"感恩教育"活动，英语教研组决定举办一场以"感恩"为主题的英语短文比赛．请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文．短文要点如下：
1．感恩对象：如父母、老师．
2．感恩理由：如父母养育之恩、老师培养之恩…
3．感恩方式：…
注意：
1．可根据内容要点适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
2．文中不得使用真实的校名和人名；
3．词数：120左右；
4．短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Always Be Grateful
As is known to all，it is one of the Chinese traditional virtues to be grateful to 
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Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息以"感恩"为主题的英语短文比赛．请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：感恩对象：如父母、老师；感恩理由：如父母养育之恩、老师培养之恩…；感恩方式：…2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：In my opinion以我的观点来看；not only…but also…不仅…而且；make every effort to不遗余力地去做；devote…to 致力于；live up to 达到，符合；In short总之
 In my opinion，our gratitude should first go to our parents because they not only provide us with food and clothing but also care for us in many ways．（高分句型一）
Second，we should thank the teachers who are making every effort to give us wisdom and knowledge and help us become useful persons．（高分句型二）
Therefore，we should devote ourselves to studying so that we can live up to their expectations．（高分句型三）

解答 Always Be Grateful
      As is known to all，it is one of the Chinese traditional virtues to be grateful to whoever has been kind and helpful to us．
      In my opinion，our gratitude should first go to our parents because they not only provide us with food and clothing but also care for us in many ways．（高分句型一）They are always willing to do whatever they can to ensure our happiness．Second，we should thank the teachers who are making every effort to give us wisdom and knowledge and help us become useful persons．（高分句型二）
      As the saying goes，actions speak louder than words．Therefore，we should devote ourselves to studying so that we can live up to their expectations．（高分句型三）It's also important to express our gratitude whenever we get help from them．
      In short，we should strengthen our sense of gratitude and take action to repay their love and kindness．
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点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．