Question

3．某英 文报"读者来信"专栏正在就高二学生家长是否应该为孩子购置电脑这一话题开展讨论．有赞同的也有反对的．请你以A reader为名给该报编辑写一封英文信，发表你的观点（或赞同或反对）．信的开头已写好．
注意：
1．下面的提示可能会帮助你构思：
more information，improve English，learning software（学习软件），enjoy oneself，computer games，short-sighted，wast e of money，fail the exams
2．你不必根据上面的提示逐条进行写作，可自由发挥．
3．字数：90以上．
4．文中不得出现真实校名，姓名．
Dear editor，
I'm a student of Senior Two．                                                                                  
                                                                 A reader．

Answer 1

分析 本文是开放性作文，根据所给提示信息，针对这一现象发表看法，以此为话题进行思维和联想，自由发挥写一封建议信，又属于提纲作文．
在写作时以第一人称和第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
（高分句型一）Those who have computers in my class are spending too much time on computer games．
该句使用了who引导一个定语从句，those who…的那些人．
（高分句型二） If we don't put our hearts into our work，we might fail in the entrance examinations．Besides，if you get a computer and don't make full use of it，it's just a waste of money．
该句使用了两个if引导的条件状语从句，
连接词使用较恰当，如Besides；So等．

解答 Dear editor，
     I'm a student of Senior One．（亮出观点）1 don't think my parents should buy me a computer now．（高分句型一）Those who have computers in my class are spending too much time on computer games．In my opinion there are many other ways to enjoy myself than playing computer games．（高分句型二） If we don't put our hearts into our work，we might fail in the entrance examinations．Besides，if you get a computer and don't make full use of it，it's just a waste of money．So I insist they not buy me a computer now．Don't you agree？Yours
                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．