Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李明，上周你班同学就“毕业前我们该为学校做些什么？”进行了讨论。请你根据以下内容要点，将同学们的建议用英语写一封信告诉你的笔友David, 并谈谈你的想法及理由。

1.为图书馆捐书； 2.美化校园； 3.刻苦学习。

注意：

1.词数120左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear David,

Last week we held an enthusiastic discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

Last week we held an enthusiastic discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have various practical suggestions.

Firstly, we’ve agreed to do something meaningful, such as collecting money to purchase some books for the school library, for it needs more science fictions.

Secondly, we feel like doing some voluntary work such as planting trees and flowers in and around our schoolyard. It could be an excellent choice for us to beautify our environment.

Finally, we have to be determined to study hard to get better results in the coming exams and make greater progress so that our school may feel very proud of us. For my part, I hold the idea that we’ll do as we can to contribute ourselves to our school in our spare time and set a good example for our fellows.

I’m wondering if you can give me some advice.

Best wishes.

Yours friendly,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文。本文要求以李华的身份给你的笔友David写信，告诉对方你班同学就“毕业前我们该为学校做些什么？”的讨论结果。所以本文要使用第一人称和一般现在时的时态。要点：1.为图书馆捐书； 2.美化校园； 3.刻苦学习。本文的要点比较简单，所以考生一定要适当添加部分内容。不能显得太空洞，写作的时候使用串联词把各要点串联起来。建议文章分为三大部分，第一部分为总起段落，中间三段分别说明三个要点，最后一段为总结归纳部分。