Question

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友 Mike 写信给你，想多了解“星光大道”这个电视节目的情况。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封回信，并鼓励他去参加这个节目。

1.  “星光大道”在中国是家喻户晓的节目。

2. 大众节目，想展示才艺的人都可以参加。

3. 表演形式：唱歌、跳舞、演奏乐器或其它才艺表演。

4. 一个叫“郝歌”的外国朋友在 2006 年还获了三等奖。

5. 鼓励他也去参加这个节目。

注意：1.字数在 100 字左右。2.可适当发挥。3. 开头的句子已给出（不计入总字数）。 

参考词汇：才艺表演 Talent Show 

Dear Mike,

I’m very glad that you are interested in the CCTV program “Avenue of Stars”.

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

In my village a lot of children have left school for many different reason. Some families are so poor to send their children to school, so their kids have to earn money to support their families. There are also many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school. They prefer to have their children do something else rather than to let them go to school. I feel worried this. I think every children should have the opportunity to receive education. And it is necessary of us to care about the children, because one day they will play important part in the construction of our country. So ways must be found to prevent children from leave off their studies.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。