Question

3．Suppose your class is having a discussion about what kind of friends you would like to have．Please write about your opinion（s） and give reasons．（假设你们班级正在进行一场讨论，主题是关于希望拥有什么样的朋友，请谈谈你的想法和理由．）
要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
（2）100词左右．
Friends are important in our life．Everyone needs friends．
What kind of friends do I want to have？I think I'd like to have two different kinds of friends．Firstly I need friends who are quiet．I'm shy and quiet person．The thing I like to do is reading books quietly．I want my friends to be the same as me so that we can read together．Secondly，I expect my friends to be funny and humorous．I have much stress from school．So I hope my friend can make me laugh．
I wish that all of us can find friends．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．
亮点句型一：Firstly I need friends who are quiet．首先我需要安静的朋友．本句中who are quiet是一个定语从句，修饰名词friends．
亮点句型二：I want my friends to be the same as me so that we can read together．我希望我的朋友和我一样，以便我们可以一起阅读． so that we can read together是一个目的状语从句．

解答 Friends are important in our life．Everyone needs friends．
What kind of friends do I want to have？I think I'd like to have two different kinds of friends．Firstly I need friends who are quiet．（亮点句型一）I'm shy and quiet person．The thing I like to do is reading books quietly．I want my friends to be the same as me so that we can read together．（亮点句型二）Secondly，I expect my friends to be funny and humorous．I have much stress from school．So I hope my friend can make me laugh．
I wish that all of us can find friends．

点评 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．