Question

5．假定你是李华，你的好朋友Dickon 就如何提高写作水平征求你的意见．你给他写了一封信，给出了两个建议：一个是建议他学好习惯用语和句子结构并用他们造句；另一个是建议他多阅读和背诵一些好文章．
注意：
1．词数100左右，
2．为使行文连贯，可以适当增加内容；
3．信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
Dear Dickon，
I have received your letter and I am glad to give you some suggestions．I think the most important thing is not to be disappointed．Many students find itdfficult to write well．In my opinion，if you want to improve your writing，you can do the following things：First，do some study with set phrases and sentence structures．Keep a list of them and then try to make some sentences with them．Second，read asmuch as possible．There are many things that can't be learnt at a time．You must readthem in books for many times．Then you'll be able to use them correctly．So，in order to write well，you must learn to read much．Finally，you'd better recite some good passages．
Good luck to you in your writing．
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
First，do some study with set phrases and sentence structures．Keep a list of them and then try to make some sentences with them
第一，做成语和句子结构一些研究．保持它们的形式，然后尝试组成相关的一些句子．
高分句型二：
So，in order to write well，you must learn to read much．Finally，you'd better recite some good passages．
所以，为了写的好，你必须学会阅读．最后，你最好背诵一些好的段落．

解答 Dear Dickon，
       I have received your letter and I am glad to give you some suggestions．I think the most important thing is not to be disappointed．Many students find it dfficult to write well．In my opinion，if you want to improve your writing，you can do the following things：First，do some study with set phrases and sentence structures．Keep a list of them and then try to make some sentences with them（高分句型一）．Second，read as much as possible．There are many things that can't be learnt at a time．You must read them in books for many times．Then you'll be able to use them correctly．So，in order to write well，you must learn to read much．Finally，you'd better recite some good passages（高分句型二）．
       Good luck to you in your writing．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．