Question

6．世界流行的母亲节Mother's Day就要到了．你会做些什么来表达你的感激之情呢？为了表达对天下母亲的崇高敬意，请你以母亲节为话题，根据以下信息，写一篇至少100字的作文．

节日时间	每年五月第二个星期天
节日起源	最先设立于美国，现已经成为国际性节日
节日特色	母亲们会接受孩子和丈夫的礼物；康乃馨（carnation）被视为献给母亲的花
中国情况	20世纪末传入到中国，中国人以自己特有的方式表达对母亲的感谢，如为母亲做饭、绘制图画、演奏音乐等．
你的打算	你准备如何向母亲表示感谢？

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Mother's Day，which was founded in America first，falls on the second Sunday in May
高分句型二：
In order to thank my mother，I will do all the housework and send a card as well as buying some flowers for my mother on that day．
句型一 which was founded in America first 该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中作主语，替代先行词Mother's Day
句型二 In order to thank my mother…该句首使用了固定短语in order to 为了．．放在句首作目的状语
此外，该书面表达中还包含有以下重要短语和高级词汇：
up  now  到目前为止     the symbol of．．的象征   be familiar with    与．．熟悉
该书面表达中的重要句型部分的从句的使用和高级短语和词汇的使用，使得文章更层次分明，表述更加确切完整．

解答 Mother's Day，which was founded in America first，falls on the second Sunday in May．（高分句型一）It has become an international festival up to now．On the special day，mothers will receive all kinds of gifts from their children and husbands．Carnation，which is the symbol of mothers，is regarded as the special flower for the day．Mother's Day was introduced into China at the end of 20^th century and now all the Chinese are familiar with the festival very much．（介绍母亲节来历）Nowadays Chinese as well as people all over the world show their thanks to their mothers in their own ways，such as cooking a special but delicious meal，drawing pictures or performing music for mothers．（中国的母亲节情况）In order to thank my mother，I will do all the housework and send a card as well as buying some flowers for my mother on that day．（高分句型二）Hopefully all the mothers will be happy forever．

点评 该书面表达为图表类，通常都有一定的数据或者表格内容作为写作参考和依据．考生应细致观察图表内容，用准确的、简单明了的语言将图表内容表达清楚．另外，平时应注意积累相应短语和词汇，以使得行文有更多的亮点．