Question

 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英主事课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语文错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.

Answer 1

【小题1】去掉on.考查介词。
【小题2】stood改为standing或前加who
【小题3】buy 改为bought;
【小题4】too 改为so
【小题5】frighteden 改为frightening
【小题6】Unfortunate 改为Unfortunately
【小题7】hard前加a
【小题8】him 改为them
【小题9】alone改为lonely
【小题10】covered 改为 covering

解析试题分析：上周日，我和父母去公园。在看老虎的窗口站着很多的游客。我们等了很长时间才买上票。我急切地去看老虎，匆忙中和父母走散了。没有人陪伴，我感到非常孤独。更为糟糕的是，我身上没钱，只好步行回家。
【小题1】去掉on.考查介词。My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. 在以last，next，tomorrow开头的短语前不加介词，故去掉on。
【小题2】stood改为standing或前加who。考查定语。There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. 本句是there be句型，句中有谓语动词，所以stood改为非谓语动词，stood和逻辑主语visitors之间是主动关系，故用现在分词，把stood改为standing。
【小题3】buy 改为bought; 考查动词时态。We waited a long time and buy three tickets。And 连接两个谓语动词，表示连续的动作，应该都用过去时，把buy改为bought。
【小题4】too 改为so考查副词。I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.。从结构可知此处是so ……that 引导的结果状语从句，前面是be eager to do，所以把too改为so。
【小题5】frightened 改为frightening 考查形容词。 I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.。以-ed结尾的形容词说明人的状态，以-ing结尾的形容词是描述事物的特征，此处指老虎，所以用frightening，意思是令人害怕的。
【小题6】Unfortunate 改为Unfortunately 考查副词。Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him。逗号前是副词修饰全句，把Unfortunate改为Unfortunately。
【小题7】hard前加a 考查冠词。I had hard time looking for him。固定短语：have a …… time “过着…..的日子”，所以在hard前面加a。
【小题8】him 改为them 考查代词。I had hard time looking for him。从上文可知作者是和父母走散了，所以把him改为them。
【小题9】alone改为lonely 考查形容词。I felt alone without any companions. Alone“独自一人”，lonely“孤独的，寂寞的”，此处表示内心的孤独，把alone改为lonely。
【小题10】covered 改为 covering考查非谓语。so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers. 从句子结构可知此处是分词做状语，和逻辑主语I之间是主动关系，应该用现在分词，把covered改为covering。
考点：考查短文改错