Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个娄子符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town,he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

Answer 1

小题1:holding---hold
小题2:passes----passed
小题3:much--- well/clearly
小题4:shoulder—shoulders
小题5:toward---to/into
小题6:himself---him
小题7:he前加and
小题8:去掉fact前的a
小题9:during---when
小题10:never---ever

小题1:此处used to意为：过去常常，to是不定式符号。故用动词原形。
小题2:根据前面的I was only four可知，用一般过去时。
小题3:根据句意可知，我很清楚地记得我的爷爷。此处very much是多的意思，不合题意。
小题4:根据常理“人有两个肩膀”。所以，用复数形式。
小题5:根据句意可知，这里指：黑胡子变成了白胡子。所以，用turn to或into的形式。
小题6:句意：他的深沉的声音把他和别人区别开来。所以，用him。
小题7:根据句中结构可知He had a deep voice, （which set him apart from others in our small town,）和he was strong and powerful.是并列关系。所以，用and连接起来。
小题8:根据固定短语in fact可知，去掉a。
小题9:根据they came over to play or do homework with me.是句子，所以，用连词when，during是介词，不能连接状语从句。
小题10:根据句意：他是我认识的最温柔的人。可知将never改为ever。这是语意错误。