Question

14．人们对待机遇有不同的态度，请以"Opportunities favour the prepared mind"为题，按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章，要点如下：

对待机遇的态度	结果	你的观点
梦想着成功，却迟迟没有行动，等着天上掉馅饼	只能看着机遇从身边悄悄溜走	（请举例说明）
默默努力着，为机遇的到来做好充分准备	最终迎来成功的喜悦

注意：
1．可参照以上内容适当发挥；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
Opportunities favour the prepared mind
There are two kinds of people taking completely different attitudes to building a bright future．One is dreaming of opportunities for a promising future，but without any action，while the other devotes himself earnestly to his work to get fully prepared．
The message conveyed above is crystal clear：Opportunities favour the prepared mind．The difference between the two lies only in the way each treats opportunities．Successful people always make adequate preparations to seize opportunities．Unsuccessful people，on the other hand，work little and just wait，seeing them pass by．
To further highlight the importance of our attitude towards opportunities，let's take the Chinese diver Wu Minxia for example．In order to win the gold medal in the Olympics，she trained hard day after day and eventually made it．Therefore，we should make efforts to make our dreams come true．It's universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts．（152）．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
One is dreaming of opportunities for a promising future，but without any action，while the other devotes himself earnestly to his work to get fully prepared
一个是梦想有前途的机会，一个没有行动，另一个则全身心地投入工作，准备充分．
高分句型二：
To further highlight the importance of our attitude towards opportunities，let's take the Chinese diver Wu Minxia for example．
为了进一步突出我们的态度对待机会的重要性，让我们以中国跳水运动员吴敏霞为例，．

解答 One possible version：
Opportunities favour the prepared mind
There are two kinds of people taking completely different attitudes to building a bright future．One is dreaming of opportunities for a promising future，but without any action，while the other devotes himself earnestly to his work to get fully prepared（高分句型一）．
The message conveyed above is crystal clear：Opportunities favour the prepared mind．The difference between the two lies only in the way each treats opportunities．Successful people always make adequate preparations to seize opportunities．Unsuccessful people，on the other hand，work little and just wait，seeing them pass by．
To further highlight the importance of our attitude towards opportunities，let's take the Chinese diver Wu Minxia for example（高分句型二）．In order to win the gold medal in the Olympics，she trained hard day after day and eventually made it．Therefore，we should make efforts to make our dreams come true．It's universally acknowledged that we would accomplish nothing without actions and efforts．（152）

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．