Question

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mary,
I am Senior 3 student. I’m going to take part in this summer’s college entrance examination. In preparation for it , I am studying every hard. As a result, I often feel exhausting both physically and mentally. Therefore, my parents still put a lot of pressure to me. I know the y have great expectations for me , but I feel the pressure is too heavy for me not to cope with. I attempted to communicating with them, but failed.
Now I quite upset about it .How can my parents understand us ? I really don’t know how to do . Could you please give me some advice?
Looking forward to your reply. 
Yours
LiH

Answer 1

小题1:在am 和senior 加 a
小题2:exhausting改为exhausted
小题3:therefore 改为however
小题4:to 改为on
小题5: not to cope 去掉not
小题6: communicating 改为 communicate
小题7: I 后面加am
小题8: us 改为me
小题9: how 改为what
小题10:advices 改为advice

小题1:在am 和senior 加 a              题意为我是一个高三的学生。缺少冠词。
小题2:exhausting改为exhausted           结果我身心疲惫。Be exhausted 筋疲力尽。
小题3:therefore 改为however            然而我的父母给我了我很大的压力，表示转折
小题4:to 改为on                       考查固定短语put pressure on sb 给某人施加压力。
小题5: not to cope 去掉not              我感觉压力太大而不能处理。Too ….to 太。。而不能，故根本需要否定词
小题6: communicating 改为 communicate  考查动词短语，attempt to do 试图做某事
小题7: I 后面加am                     考查短语 be upset about 对，，感到不安，缺少系动词。
小题8: us 改为me                      本文以第一人称来叙述，故用me.
小题9: how 改为what                   固定搭配 what to do 如何做。
小题10:advices 改为advice                advice 是不可数名词，故不能用复数形式。