Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。上周你们班组织了一次班会，邀请去年毕业的同学回校交流。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】 Last week, our class invited a graduate to give us some suggestions on what we should do during the most important year in high school.

The graduate arrived at the scheduled time. We were delighted to see him and eager to hear the wisdom he was about to pass on to us. After a brief greeting in response to our warm applause, our guest began his talk. He first shared his study plan he made for his senior year and emphasized the importance of time management, which left me a deep impression. Afterwards, he vividly described his interesting college life. Inspired by his words, we all listened attentively and took notes.

Before seeing him off, I asked him how to review for the exam and how to balance the busy school life with some kind of relaxation, on which he gave some enlightening ideas.

That night, I had the most fulfilling time setting my short-term and long-term goals as well as planning for my future study. I’m now full of confidence and energy, and prepared to give 100% for my ambition and dreams.

【解析】

这是一篇图画类作文。要求考生用英语写一篇英文周记记述班会的整个过程。

第一步：审题

体裁：图画类作文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时。

结构：总分法

要求：按照4幅图画的先后顺序写一篇英文周记记述班会的整个过程。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

invited；suggestion；scheduled；eager to；emphasize

第三步：连词成句

1. Last week, our class invited a graduate to give us some suggestions on what we should do during the most important year in high school.

2. The graduate arrived at the scheduled time.

3. We were delighted to see him and eager to hear the wisdom he was about to pass on to us.

4. After a brief greeting in response to our warm applause, our guest began his talk.

5. He first shared his study plan he made for his senior year and emphasized the importance of time management, which left me a deep impression.

6. Afterwards, he vividly described his interesting college life.

7. Before seeing him off, I asked him how to review for the exam and how to balance the busy school life with some kind of relaxation, on which he gave some enlightening ideas.

8. That night, I had the most fulfilling time setting my short-term and long-term goals as well as planning for my future study.

9. I’m now full of confidence and energy, and prepared to give 100% for my ambition and dreams.

第四步：连句成篇

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。