Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是邢台市第一中学学生李华，你的美国笔友约翰来信询问雅安地震情况，并表达了要去灾区当志愿者的愿望。请你回信，内容主要包括：

1. 伤亡情况： 死约200人，伤逾万人。

2. 救援人员： 军队，当地政府及民众。

3. 婉言劝止并说明理由。

注意： 1. 词数100左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 相关词汇：rescue 救援 the trapped 被困人员

Dear John,

Thank you very much for your concern over the earthquake in Ya’an, Sichuan Province.

Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

Thank you very much for your concern over the earthquake in Ya’an, Sichuan Province. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.

As far as I know, about two hundred people were killed and more than ten thousand injured in the earthquake. The army was soon sent to join the local government in the rescue. Together with the local people, they are making every effort to search for the trapped and send the injured to hospitals.

I know you are dying to help out. But personally, I don’t think it’s a good idea for you to come. You know, danger still exists. Besides, you will find it hard to communicate with people there, after all, you speak a different language.

Anyway, thank you for your offer and I will keep you informed of the situation.

Yours

LiHua.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文。要求考生以李华的身份给美国笔友约翰回信，告知雅安地震情况。所以本文使用第一人称和一般过去时。要点：1.感谢对方对雅安地震的关心。2.介绍伤亡及救援情况： 死约200人，伤逾万人。救援人员：军队，当地政府及民众。3. 婉言劝止并说明理由：仍然存在危险；因为语言问题，约翰很难与当地人交流。并不能起到救援的作用。建议文章分成三段，第一段为第一点；第二段介绍伤亡及救援情况，第三段婉言劝阻并说明理由。写作时注意使用高级句式以及合适的串联词。