Question

书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

I’m the mother of a sixteen-year-old , I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another She has been doing very well in school , but some friends of mine keep telling me that 1 put too much pressure on her Am 1 wrong?

写作要点：

1、表明自己的看法；

2、陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）

3、提出至少两条建议。

要求：

1、短文须写在指定区域。

2、短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）

3、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

4、书写须清晰、工整。

Hi , TigerMom,

What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi , TigerMom,

What puzzles you is netually a puzzle for many parents in China .  In my opinion , what you think and what you do are not suitable.

Although high grades are important in assessing students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom ,emotion, health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us . Some top students in school have turned out not to be as sueeessfus in society as they are expccted . The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Besider , punishment is by no means a wise choiee to

help them grow up mentally and physieally.

So I suggest that you take your friends ’ advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl , let her have more friends and soeial activities ,and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.

【解析】略