Question

假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。

自然情况	①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住
成 ．就	②经济发展迅速 ③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。
存在问题	④水、空气污染 ⑤交通拥挤
对江城发展的看法	⑥(内容由考生自己拟定)

注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。
2．词数100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。
参考词汇：经济economy n．
Dear Bob，
It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng．

Answer 1

Dear Bob，
It’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about me hometown Jiangcheng.
The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.
Yours，
Xiaohua

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.在个人观点部分可以从可持续发展等方面提出自己的观点。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
考点：提纲类作文
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。