Question

【题目】高二即将过去，高三已经在向同学们招手。随着学习和心里压力日益加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如睡眠不好。假如你是李华，请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一封信件，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例说明:

1、劳逸结合；

2、健康饮食；

3、适当锻炼；

4、保持乐观心态。

注意：1、短文必须包括所列内容；

2、词数100左右；

Dear Editors,

With the approach of Senior 3 studies, students who have almost finished Senior 2 are under increasingly great pressure, which has affected some students’life.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editors,

With the approach of Senior 3 studies, students who have almost finished Senior 2 are under increasingly great pressure, which has affected some students’ life. This prevents them sleeping well and causes problems with their health. In order to improve the condition, I’d like to offer some advice.

First and foremost, combine work with rest. Keep in mind that all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Furthermore, it is important to keep a healthy and balanced diet. Staying away from junk food and eating healthy food like vegetables and fish will benefit you. In addition, go outdoors and take regular exercise, for physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of pressure. Last but not least, good health means being both physically and mentally healthy. Keeping an optimistic state of mind will contribute to a good physical state.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题这是一篇应用文中的书信写作。请你用给学校英语刊物写信，给高三阶段压力很大的同学提出建议，并简述理由或者举例说明。

书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。要点都已经给出，写作中要包含以下四点：1、劳逸结合；2、健康饮食；3、适当锻炼；4、保持乐观心态。但是要点只是提纲，考生要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，选择合适的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。