Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，谙你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多fl两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

  Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving by Miss Liu. One Monday morning,when she entered into the classroom,we found that she was young and beautiful lady. Then she introduced her and said we shouldn't call her Teacher Liu but Miss Liu. Late,she let us go to the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turn. When it was my turn,I felt too shy that I didn't dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kind, "Don't be afraid. I believe you can do it good. " At last,I went to the blackboard. She praised me for that I had done.

Answer 1

 Never shall I forget the first English lesson given by Miss given Liu. One Monday morning,when she entered  the class?room,we found that she was a young and beautiful lady.Then she introduced herself and said we shouldn't call herTeacher Liu but Miss Liu. Later,she let us go to the black-board and say something about ourselves in English in turn,When it was my turn* I felt so shy that I didn't dare to say anything before the class. She went up to me and said kindly,"Don't be afraid. I believe you can do it well.”At last,Iwent to the blackboard. She praised me for what I had done.