Question

【题目】假定你是英语课代表，请根据以下材料写一篇英语短文，在校报上发表。现如今，越来越多的人选择叫外卖。就此现象，你班同学进行了一次热烈讨论，讨论结果如下：

外卖优点	1.方便，美味 2.节约时间 3.种类多，随便选…
外卖缺点	1.不健康（多含盐,脂肪） 2.不干净，不卫生 3.餐盒太多，污染环境…
你的观点及建议	…………

参考词汇：方便的：convenient adj. 现象：phenomenon n.

卫 生：hygiene n. 餐盒：food box

注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2.词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。

Nowadays, more and more people call the Take-out food. Our class had a heated discussion about the phenomenon.

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, more and more people call the Take-out food. Our class had a heated discussion about the phenomenon.

Some students think the Take-out food is very delicious and convenient. It can save much time for us. What’s more, there are many kinds of food for you to choose.

While other students think the Take-out food is unhealthy because it contains too much fat or salt. Besides, the food hygiene is worrying, sometimes it makes people have a stomachache. What’s worse, too many food boxes cause much pollution to our environment.

In my opinion, in order to be healthier and safer, we shouldn’t eat too much Take-out food. We should often have meals at home or at school canteen.

【解析】该题为提纲类作文写作。假定你是英语课代表，请根据以下材料写一篇英语短文，在校报上发表。现如今，越来越多的人选择叫外卖。就此现象，你班同学进行了一次热烈讨论，讨论结果应包括正方观点即外卖优点：1.方便，美味；2.节约时间；3.种类多，随便选…反方观点即外卖缺点：1.不健康（多含盐,脂肪）；2.不干净，不卫生；3.餐盒太多，污染环境…最后再陈述你的观点及建议，使文章更加圆满。

议论文要有始有终，写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的要点写全，语句通顺，而且要准确运用时态、语态，使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

亮点说明：本文是一篇英语议论文，内容齐全，语言流畅，结构严谨，使用高级词汇。

What’s more取代一般连词and，While在句首用于句意转折， Besides取代一般连词and，在列举外卖缺点的最后用What’s worse取代一般连词and，使文章更加饱满，充盈。