Question

7．假如你是李华，你班同学Sandy得了心脏病需要做手术，但是由于她家境不好，付不起医疗费（medical fees），请你写一份发言稿，号召同学们踊跃捐款．以下是写作的内容要点．
1．描述Sandy现在的具体情况．
2．呼吁大家奉献爱心，尽力而为．
3．感谢大家的理解和帮助，世界因爱而温暖．
注意：1．词数100左右；首句已给出．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
 My dear classmates，I've got something to tell you．
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Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮点句型一：Therefore，I hope that everybody can give her a hand and donate some money so that she can pick up her health again．因此，我希望每个人都能帮她一把，捐出一些钱，这样她就能重新恢复健康．本句中"that everybody can…her health again"引导的是宾语从句，在宾语从句中so that she can pick up her health again引导的引导的是目的状语从句．
亮点句型二：What matters is that we are doing all we can to help our classmate．重要的是我们正在尽我们所能帮助我们的同学．本句中 that we are doing all we can to help our classmate引导的是表语从句，在这个表语从句中we can to help our classmate是一个定于从句修饰先行词all，省略了关系代词that．

解答 My dear classmates，I've got something to tell you．Unfortunately，Sandy，one of our classmates，is now suffering from a serious heart disease．As a result，she is in need of receiving an operation as soon as possible．However，her family is too poor to afford the medical fees．Therefore，I hope that everybody can give her a hand and donate some money so that she can pick up her health again．（亮点句型一）It doesn't matter how much you donate．What matters is that we are doing all we can to help our classmate．（亮点句型二）Thank you first for your understanding and help．Our world is warm because of the love in our heart and our class is like a big family since we love and care about each other．Thank you!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．