Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Dan Friedell来信询问中国广场舞。请你写一封电子邮件，介绍你了解的情况。信的内容包括：

1．时间和地点；

2．舞蹈人群；

3．舞蹈形式。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．开头结尾已经给出，不计入字数。

Dear Dan Friedell,

I’m gald to tell you something about square dance.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Dan Friedell

Square dance has been popular only in recent years.People dance in the evening on a spquare in the city and they never dance along the street.The goal of the dance is to get some exercise to benefit health and of course there are still some who are interested in dancing.

They are usually dancing to popular music played by music equipment.The dances are simple

And very easy to learn.They often attract passers-by, standing by and watching,but they are slso blamed for their loud noises.Sometimes they are too noisy indeed!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题，假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Dan Friedell来信询问中国广场舞。请你写一封电子邮件，介绍你了解的情况。信的内容包括：1．时间和地点；2．舞蹈人群；3．舞蹈形式。其次要确定时态，表示经常或反复发生的事情，所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构，按照题目所给内容逐条翻译即可。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在一百词左右。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如The goal of the dance is to get some exercise to benefit health and of course there are still some who are interested in dancing.这里含有一个定语从句。