Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；  2.只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 去掉in

 very改成 so

 knowing 改成Known

 the 改成an

 that 改成Who

 looking后面加was或looked

 ideas改成 idea

 waited改成,waiting

 Unluckily改成 Luckily

 so改成because

【解析】

试题分析：

 Last night单独在句中做时间状语，in是多余的

 固定句型so…that…如此…以至于…

 公司和know构成被动关系，使用过去分词

 泛指一次面试

 that不能引导非限制性定语从句

 句中的主语是Mr Turner，这里要的是谓语动词

 固定词组have no idea不知道

 he与wait之间是主动关系，使用现在分词做状语

 根据下文，他得到了这份工作，应该是幸运地

 本句内容是解释原因，so后面的句子表示的结果

考点：考查短文纠错

点评：考查考生在上下文中灵活运用语法的能力，本文特别考了更多句型和固定词组，要特别注意词性和词形的变化。