Question

4．你的作文应包括以下内容：

1．简要描述该图的内容；
2．概述你对该图中言行不一的现象的理解；
3．举例说明该图对你的启示．
注意：
1．可参照图画适当发挥；
2．作文词数150左右；
3．作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．

Answer 1

分析 本文为看图作文．写作时可按"三段式"来写，首先描述图片点明主题，然后分析概述对图片所反映的现象的理解，最后发表感想．
写作时时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主．
重要短语：be used to do（被用来做某事），call on sb to do（号召某人做某事），take action（采取行动），huge amounts of（很多），suffer sth（遭受…..），convey sth （传达某事），claim to do（声称做某事），A contradict B（A与B相矛盾），fail to（没能做某事），require sb to do sth（要求某人做某事），observe traffic rules（遵守交通规则），tend to（倾向于做某事），violate sth（违反某事），get trapped in（陷入…），in one's opinion（某人认为），achieve our goals（实现目标）．
【高分句型一】
1．As is vividly shown in the picture，a trumpet carrying a slogan"PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT"is used to call on people to take action immediately．
    此处是由关系代词"as"引导的非限制性定语从句，"as"在从句中作主语，意为"正如"，主句为"a trumpet carrying a slogan"PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT"is used to call on people to take action immediately．"
【高分句型二】
2．But meanwhile it is giving off huge amounts of waste gases，which makes the trees along the road suffer a lot．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，主句为"But meanwhile it is giving off huge amounts of waste gases"．
【高分句型三】
3．②What the picture conveys to us is ③that some people claim to protect the environment，①but actually they are polluting it．
①此处是由连词"but"连接的两个表示转折关系的句子．
②此处是由疑问代词"what"引导的主语从句，"what"在主语从句中作动词"convey"的宾语，谓语动词为"is"．
③此处是由连接词"that"引导的表语从句．
【高分句型四】
4．It's obvious that their deeds contradict their words．
此处是由形式主语"it"引导的主句从句，结构为"It+be+形容词+that+句子"．
【高分句型五】
5．①When we require others to observe traffic rules，we ourselves tend to violate them，②in which case we can hardly see a fast-flowing traffic and will frequently get trapped in the traffic．
①此处是由疑问副词"when"引导的时间状语从句，主句为"we ourselves tend to violate them"．
②此处是非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"指代前面整个主句的内容．

解答 As is vividly shown in the picture，a trumpet carrying a slogan"PROTECT THE ENVIRONMENT"is used to call on people to take action immediately．【高分句型一】But meanwhile it is giving off huge amounts of waste gases，which makes the trees along the road suffer a lot．【高分句型二】（描述图片）
What the picture conveys to us is that some people claim to protect the environment，but actually they are polluting it．【高分句型三】It's obvious that their deeds contradict their words．【高分句型四】Whether conscious or unconscious，these people will surely fail to see a good environment．Unfortunately，the phenomenon is not alone in our society．For example，when we require others to observe traffic rules，we ourselves tend to violate them，in which case we can hardly see a fast-flowing traffic and will frequently get trapped in the traffic．【高分句型五】（对该图中言行不一的现象的理解）
In my opinion，we should match deeds with words．Only in this way can we achieve our goals．（启示）

点评 写好这类图表及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．