Question

书面表达(满分25分)

请根据下面提示，用英文简要描写你的一位好朋友周亮。

1． 年龄16岁，身材不高，虽然不太聪明 可是相当勤奋。经常受到老师的表扬。

2． 兴趣广泛，爱好足球、音乐等；并经常记日记。

3． 待人谦虚( modest )，乐于助人，与同学们相处很好。并耐心帮你学英语；

4． 大家都很喜欢他，你也喜欢他。

注意：1. 词数: 100 词左右;

2. 题目: My Best Friend_

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Answer 1

My Best Friend

Zhou Liang is my best friend. He’s sixteen. He is not very tall.Although he is not very clever, he is very diligent and works very hard .He is always praised by our teachers.He also gets along very well with others.

He has many different interests. He is fond of music. He loves sports very much. He is a member of our school football team. Zhou Liang also likes to keep a diary evey day. He works hard at his lessons so he does well in all the subjects. He is modest and ready to help others. He has helped me with my English. With his help, I have made much progress and caught up with my classmates.

Everyone in my class likes Zhou Liang, so do I

 

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇关于人物的小短文。文章内容比较简单，只需要简单翻译。审题时注意时态和人称，本文使用一般现在时和第三人称。写作时注意使用丰富的句式，不要总是使用简单句，那样会显得过于单调，文章缺乏文采。同时要使用合适的连接词，让文章成为一个整体。注意文章要分段，不要写成一段论。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语gets along very well with与。。相处融洽；keep a diary记日记；does well in擅长做某事；help sb with sth在某方面帮助某人；make progress取得进步；He works hard at his lessons so he does well in all the subjects.这个句子so连接两个句子；Everyone in my class likes Zhou Liang, so do I这个句子运用到so+情态动词/助动词/系动词 +主语；

考点： 提纲类作文