Question

7．日前，某寄宿制中学（boarding school）明文禁止学生叫外卖（order take-away food），学生中议论纷纷．假设你是学生会主席李明，请代表全校同学给校长写一封信，信中内容包括：
1向校方反馈同学们对此规定的看法．
2向校方提出的意见和建议．
（文中不得出现考生姓名、学校等任何真实信息）
Dear Respectable Principal，
On behalf of all students in our school，I'm writing to you about the school ban on ordering take-away food imposed by our school recently．（高分句型一）
We all agree that the ban on take-away food is reasonable．The quality of take-away food is not reliable and might do harm to our health，so this ban is aimed at protecting our health and helping us form a good eating habit．（高分句型二）
Meanwhile，there are still some problems even if we don't order take-away food．We sincerely hope our school will improve the service of the school canteen．Basically，there is a variety of food in our school canteen and the taste is acceptable．But it is super-crowded during lunch break，and many of us have to line up too long．Is it possible more windows will offer food？What's worse，the food we can get after long-time waiting is cold in winter，which is far from satisfactory．（高分句型三）Besides，we strongly advise our school to offer the night-time snacks．Most students have supper before five o'clock，so many of us，especially boys，feel hungry at night．Without night-time snacks，no wonder many students turn to instant noodles to satisfy our appetite at night，which is bad for health．（高分句型四）
To sum up，our school has made a right decision，while there is still room for improvement，which all students are looking forward to．

Faithfully Yours
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息代表全校同学给校长写一封信，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：向校方反馈同学们对此规定的看法；向校方提出的意见和建议．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态； 4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：On behalf of代表；do harm to 对…有害；is aimed at针对；Meanwhile同时；Basically基本上；What's worse更糟的是；far from远不，远非；a variety of 各种各样的；no wonder 难怪；is bad for 对…有害；To sum up总之

解答 Dear Respectable Principal，
     On behalf of all students in our school，I'm writing to you about the school ban on ordering take-away food imposed by our school recently．（高分句型一）
     We all agree that the ban on take-away food is reasonable．The quality of take-away food is not reliable and might do harm to our health，so this ban is aimed at protecting our health and helping us form a good eating habit．（高分句型二）
     Meanwhile，there are still some problems even if we don't order take-away food．We sincerely hope our school will improve the service of the school canteen．Basically，there is a variety of food in our school canteen and the taste is acceptable．But it is super-crowded during lunch break，and many of us have to line up too long．Is it possible more windows will offer food？What's worse，the food we can get after long-time waiting is cold in winter，which is far from satisfactory．（高分句型三）Besides，we strongly advise our school to offer the night-time snacks．Most students have supper before five o'clock，so many of us，especially boys，feel hungry at night．Without night-time snacks，no wonder many students turn to instant noodles to satisfy our appetite at night，which is bad for health．（高分句型四）
     To sum up，our school has made a right decision，while there is still room for improvement，which all students are looking forward to．
 
                                                                                                                                                                                         Faithfully Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Ming

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．