Question

假如你是某高中学生李光，进入高中后，你觉得学英语的方式 和初中有很大不同，你给自己的英语老师王老师写了一封信，讲述自己的英语学习情况。要包括以下内容：

1. 开始学习高中英语时，觉得英语比初中英语难很多，几乎丧失信心。

2. 后来认识到英语的重要性，每天努力学习英语，向老师和同学请教更好的英语学习方法。

3. 现在英语取得了很大进步，对英语越来越感兴趣。

要求：字数100左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Mr. Wang,

  I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student.

  When I started senior English in the beginning, I found it much more difficult than what we learned in junior school and I almost lose heart. Later, I realized the importance of English, so I got up early every morning, recited English words, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercises. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English.

  Now, I’m improving my English greatly. And I’m getting more and more interested in learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class.

  Wish you all the best.

【解析】

试题分析：题目是常见的书信作文，要求以李光的身份给英语老师写一封信，讲述自己在英语方面的学习情况。作文要包含所有要点，可以分三大部分来写：第一段是写信时的礼貌性问候；第二段写遇到的难处以及是怎样克服的；第三段告诉老师自己的进步并表示感谢。使用第一人称进行写作；注意写信的格式。单词拼写、标点符号、时态、语法知识要正确，使用得当。

【亮点说明】首先，范文以祝愿结尾，格式很规范。范文注意使用When I started senior English, Later, so, Now, And等衔接句子和上下文，使作文显得有条理，并且很紧凑；

范文使用了宾语从句tell you that I have made great progress in my English study和what we learned in junior school；时间状语从句since I became a senior high school student.；现在进行时I’m getting more and more interested in learning it等重要语法知识和时态；语法知识掌握扎实，并能灵活运用；

范文还使用了一些固定短语：in the beginning；lose heart；listened to；asked...for；ways of learning English等，使作文的内容比较充实。

考点：书信类作文