Question

假设今年暑假你将去参加学校组织的夏令营活动。学校组织你们去英国伦敦。
活动内容：
1.与那儿的中学老师和学生交流，了解他们的生活和学习情况；
2.参观大英博物馆，了解当地的历史和文化；去英国家庭就餐，学做甜品（dessert），以便于回国后与家人、朋友分享；
3.去英国的农村，感受大自然。
[写作要求] 
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
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Answer 1

This summer holiday, I will take part in the summer camp to London, Britain, organized by our school. We will be given a chance to communicate with the British secondary school teachers and students, so that we can know about their lives and studies. We will have a visit to the British Museum to learn about its local culture and history. We will also have a chance to go the British family to have dinner with them and learn how to make dessert, which I can make to entertain my family and friends after coming back to China. In addition, we will go to the countryside of Britain, enjoying the beautiful natural scenery.

试题分析：考查提纲作文：考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是提纲作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点，考生要多使用复杂句，一句话中多包含些信息。
【亮点说明】This summer holiday, I will take part in the summer camp to London, Britain, organized by our school. 这句话用的是过去分词做定语，We will be given a chance to communicate with the British secondary school teachers and students, so that we can know about their lives and studies. 这句话是目的状语从句，We will also have a chance to go the British family to have dinner with them and learn how to make dessert, which I can make to entertain my family and friends after coming back to China.这句话用的是非限制性定语从句，In addition, we will go to the countryside of Britain, enjoying the beautiful natural scenery. 这句话是用可现在分词做状语。