Question

1．生活中．你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历，其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨…请就此写一篇英语短文．
主要内容包括，1）丢失的物品：2）物品失而复得的经过； 3）你的感想．
注意：
Ⅰ．词数不少于120个；
Ⅱ．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．要求根据所提供信息写一篇短文．要点包括：丢失的物品；物品失而复得的经过；你的感想．可见文章的中心和重点要放在"经过"的描写之中，但是也要描写自己的感受，写出作者自己的烦恼、惊喜、感慨；尤其要包含失而复得的复杂过程，是一篇夹叙夹议的作文．写作时应以过去时为主．人称以第一人称为主．重要短语：made a call （打电话），as usual（如通常一样），be absent-minded（心不在焉），take trouble to do（不辞辛劳地做某事），It turned out that （结果是，证明是），remind sb to do （提醒某人做某事）．

解答 One possible version：
Oh，my God!Where is my iPhone？I made a call just now on the bus．Suddenly I remembered I've put it on the seat next to me．It's my birthday present from my father．He would be sad if he knew it．（丢失的物品）
  I go to school as usual this morning，trying to stay calm．【高分句型】The first two classes ended quickly because I was absent-minded．During the break，my math teacher asked me to visit him．I am very uneasy because I didn't know what I had done wrong．Seeing me standing there，my teacher showed me my iPhone．【高分句型】Overjoyed，I grasped it back quickly．It turned out that the driver of the bus that I often take saw the picture of me in my iPhone and knew that I was a student of×××school．（物品失而复得的经过）
I am very moved that the driver took so much trouble to send it to my school．The event will always remind me to be kind and helpful．（感想）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．