Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

During the holiday I take part in a special summer camp. There I met a girl from Canvey, a town on the Thames, where is to the east of London. As a host, I showed him around such place as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. She was deeply impressing by the great sights. I also told her about the great changes that had been taken place in the past few decades. She said Beijing was quite different from that she had expected and that it was very beautifully. Meanwhile, I improved my spoken English in her help. I think summer camp is very valuable.

Answer 1

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【解析】考查动词时态。文章使用一般过去时描述，故将take改为took。

考查定语从句。先行词为Thames，关系词在从句中充当主语，故将where改为which。

考查代词。上文中提到girl，故将代词him改为her。

考查名词复数。句中提到两个名胜古迹：长城，故宫。故将place改为places。

考查固定短语。句意：壮丽的景色给她留下了深刻的印象。sb. be impressed给某人留下印象。故将impressing改为impressed。

考查固定用法。take place发生，没有被动语态。故将been去掉。

考查宾语从句。What在从句中充当excepted的宾语，故将that改为what。

考查形容词。形容词作表语，故将beautifully改为beautiful。

考查介词。在谁的帮助下by/with the help of sb.或by/with one’s help故将in改为with/by。

考查定冠词。上文中提及并特指应使用定冠词the。