Question

19．假设你叫李华，从互联网上（the Internet）上得知一个国际中学组织将在新加坡（Singapore） 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加．请写一封电子邮件申请参加．
内容主要包括：
1．自我介绍（包括英语能力）；
2．参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；
3．希望获准．
注意：
1．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数100左右；
3．邮件开头和结尾已为你写好．
Dear Sir or Madam，
                ．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一）I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．
该句型that you have posted…引导一个定语从句，修饰先行词the summer camp，that在句子里做post宾语．
（高分句型二）What is more，I'lI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well．
该句首先使用What is more来起到承上启下的作用，在句子里tell sb sth和learn about为两个并列句．
高级词汇短语：announcement 通知；take part in 参加；I've been learning 现在完成进行时；be accepted as 被接受．

解答 作文
Dear Sir or Madam，
　　I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China．（高分句型一）I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I speak fluent English．（高分句型二）What is more，I'JI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well．I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp．
　　Looking forward to your reply!
　　                                                    Yours sincerely，
                                                        Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．