Question

假如你是小华, Jane是美国人。在她暑假来中国游玩时你们相识,并成为好朋友。Jane回国后,你很想念她,于是给她写了一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受，信头信尾均已给出。要求120词左右。
内容包括：
1.新学校的生活、学习情况与感受。
2.表达对她父母的问候，并请她明年来你校看看的愿望。
Dear Jane,
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Yours sincerely,
Xiaohua

Answer 1

Dear Jane, 
How’s everything going? I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. I miss you very much after you left China and thus I am writing this letter to tell you something about me. I entered senior high school in September. The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges. My teachers and classmates are all very kind. I have decided to try my best to learn a lot from them. Of course, I will also do more exercise to keep fit.
Give my best regards to your parents and I am looking forward to your visiting my school next year.
Yours sincerely,
Xiaohua

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。要求给Jane写一封信,并且和她谈了你对高一新生活的感受。内容包括： 1.新学校的生活、学习情况与感受。2.表达对她父母的问候，并请她明年来你校看看的愿望。
要点都已经给出，审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。还要用适当的连接词被句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【亮点说明】范文语言简洁，要点全面， 词组有：keep fit.保持健康，do more exercise多锻炼， Give my best regards to代某人向…问好， look forward to 盼望，句式多变：I’m so glad to have met you and become friends with you. 这句话用不定式， The school is very beautiful and I feel that the new life is very exciting and full of challenges.这句话用了宾语从句。