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6．随着网络在人们生活中的广泛使用，在生日或其他重大节日时，越来越多的好友或家人喜欢通过发送电子贺卡来表达他们的祝愿．根据以下提示，简述使用电子贺卡的优点，并谈谈自己的看法．
1．使用便捷，传递速度快，不受时空限制；
2．形式多样，生动有趣；
3．节约资源，利于环保．
文章应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，字数100左右．
参考词汇：电子贺卡：e-card （electronic card）

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
With the wide use of the Internet in our daily life，more and more students tend to send electronic cards to friends and family members on the occasions of their birthdays or festivals．
随着互联网在我们日常生活中的广泛使用，越来越多的学生倾向于在生日或节日的时候向朋友和家人发送电子贺卡．
高分句型二：
Most importantly，electronic cards are more environmentally friendly and helpful to save both labor and natural resources．
最重要的是，电子卡更环保、节省劳动力和自然资源．

解答 With the wide use of the Internet in our daily life，more and more students tend to send electronic cards to friends and family members on the occasions of their birthdays or festivals（高分句型一）．
    Compared with paper cards，electronic ones have many advantages．Firstly，it's more convenient and quicker to send and receive them as well，without being limited by time and space．Secondly，they take various forms of motion pictures，music and so on，which is more interesting and lively．Most importantly，electronic cards are more environmentally friendly and helpful to save both labor and natural resources（高分句型二）．
    For me，due to reminders from QQ，I've never missed any chances to say"Happy birthday"to my friends and grandparents far away via electronic cards．I have to say it is just the Internet that is making my life more colorful and comfortable．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．