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3．2015年两会前夕，原中央台记者柴静自费制作的关于环境污染的纪录片《穹顶之下》引起强烈反响．假如你是李华，应用英语给21世纪英文报写一封信，表达你的观点．
内容包括：1．阐述柴静所做的事对我们生活的影响
          2．面临环境污染我们能做些什么
注意：1．词数100 左右
      2．开头和 结尾已给出，不计入总词数
Dear editor，
After watching the movie Under the Dome，I was deeply moved by what ChaiJing did．____________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
         Best wishes!
                                                      Yours，
                                                       LiHua．

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分析 本文要求考生对纪录片《穹顶之下》做出评论，题中已经给出了要点内容，考生首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，
 重要短语：
 be worthy of，值得；approve of 支持；For instance，例如；
高分句子：
1．I'm strongly convinced that an increasing number of Chinese have realized the great harm that pollution has done and will do what they can to improve our environment．本句为that引导的宾语从句，从句中又包含了what引导的主语从句，很见考生功底．
2．Only when we make every effort to reduce pollution can we feel ease under the dome，本句为重要句式，only位于从句句首时，主句要进行倒装，意为只有…才…

解答 Dear editor，
      After watching the movie Under the Dome，I was deeply moved by what Chai Jing did．The movie has aroused the public's environmental awareness and is worthy of admiration（叙述影响）．
      Thanks to the movie，I'm strongly convinced that an increasing number of Chinese have realized the great harm that pollution has done and will do what they can to improve our environment（高分句型）．
      I approve of the view that everyone is supposed to take effective measures to protect our environment from being polluted．For instance，we can choose green transport like walking and bicycling．Obviously，the government should strengthen the management of pollutant emission．Only when we make every effort to reduce pollution can we feel ease under the dome（高分句型）．We do need the immediate change（给出建议）．
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．