Question

19．假定你是李华．你校将于周四晚上举办一场英语演讲比赛．请你用英语给外教Charlie写一封邀请函，邀请他担任评委．要点如下：
1．比赛时间、地点：6月8日，周四晚7点至9点，报告厅．
2．演讲主题：中西文化差异．
3．参赛选手：高二学生．
4．评判内容：语音、语调（intonation）、内容等．
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Charlie，
I'm honored to invite you to be the judge of an English speech contest to be held this Thursday evening，July 6th，at the lecture hall．Competitors are from Grade Two and the topic of the speech is about culture differences between China and western countries．Speeches will be graded based on competitors'pronunciation，intonation and the content of the speech．The two-hour event will begin at 7：00 p．m．，and please be here a little earlier so I can explain to you more details．Please contact me at 1234567@qq．com if necessary．
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达是一封邀请信，要求根据学校将于周四晚上举办一场英语演讲比赛．用英语给外教Charlie写一封邀请函，邀请他担任评委．应该以第一人称为主，用一般现在时和将来时来写．要注意邀请信的格式：要先说明写信的目的，然后交代1．比赛时间、地点：6月8日，周四晚7点至9点，报告厅．2．演讲主题：中西文化差异．3．参赛选手：高二学生．4．评判内容：语音、语调（intonation）、内容等．最后交代希望对方到来．写作时要注意目的明确，条理清楚，还要尽量使用一些高级词汇和句型增加文章亮点
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：如不定式to invite you和to be held的运用，一般将来时的被动结构will be graded；还运用了词语be honored to，based on，Looking forward to等．
I'm honored to invite you to be the judge of an English speech contest to be held this Thursday evening，July 6th，at the lecture hall．（高分句型一）
Speeches will be graded based on competitors'pronunciation，intonation and the content of the speech．（高分句型二）
The two-hour event will begin at 7：00 p．m．，and please be here a little earlier so I can explain to you more details．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Charlie，
      I'm honored to invite you to be the judge of an English speech contest to be held this Thursday evening，July 6th，at the lecture hall．（高分句型一）Competitors are from Grade Two and the topic of the speech is about culture differences between China and western countries．Speeches will be graded based on competitors'pronunciation，intonation and the content of the speech．（高分句型二）The two-hour event will begin at 7：00 p．m．，and please be here a little earlier so I can explain to you more details．（高分句型三）Please contact me at 1234567@qq．com if necessary．
      Looking forward to your coming!
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．