Question

假如你是李华，是一位高二学生。最近你发现一些同学在教室使用手机，影响学习。请用英语给校长写封信，反映这些同学在教室使用手机的情况，并提出两条建议。

要点提示 一：在课堂上经常听到手机的铃声；二：有的同学还在课堂上发短信。

注意:

1．要求作适当发挥,使信的内容充实、连贯流畅；

2．词数：不少于120；

3．参考词汇：手机的铃声the ringing of mobile phones

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear principal,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior Grade Two. Recently some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ringing of mobile phones, which has a bad effect on our study. What’s worse, some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobiole phone. In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to study, so quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons.

To keep the classroom quiet, I suggest our school make the following rules about the use of mobile phones in the classroom. First, those with mobile phones should turn them off in class. Second, they should not talk on the phone or send short messages in the classroom. I think, if anyone breaks the rules, proper ways should be thought of to punish him or her.

I would appreciate it if you can take what I said into consideration! Thanks!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。