分析 上文是Bob写给Smith女士的一封感谢信;信中提到:Bob参加野营时,由于Smith女士对他的帮助与鼓励,使得他逐渐结识了其他的露营者,并获得了很大的自信心;而且在他返回学校后,不但他的学习成绩进步了,人变得活跃了,结交了新的朋友,而且现在他还收到了大学的录取通知书;为此Bob非常感谢Smith女士,是她帮助自己变成了一个与以前截然不同的人.
解答 Dear Ms.Smith,
I appreciate your help very well.On the first day of Camp,you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.After that,you always gave me specially attention and inspire me to join in activities.As the result,I gradually got to know the other campers.Because∧the help you gave me that summer.My life changed.I gained so much confidence that I returned back to school as a new person.My grades improved.I became very active but made new friends.Today,I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college.I am proud of it.I just want to thank for helping me becoming a different person.
Yours,
Bob.
详解:
1.将well改为much 考查副词词义辨析"very well"意为:很好地;非常好;"very much"意为:非常;这里指的是:我非常感谢你的帮助;故用much
2.将myself改为me 考查人称代词 本句的意思是:当我独自一人的时候,你走到我面前;myself指的是:我自己;而这里指的是"我";由于此处用在介词to之后作宾语,所以应使用人称代词的宾格形式;故用me
3.将specially改为special 考查形容词 此处用来修饰名词attention,故用形容词special
4.将inspire改为inspired 考查动词的形式 此处与动词gave一起在句中作并列谓语;根据上文可知,此处指的是在Bob第一次野营时发生的事情,所以应使用一般过去时;故用inspired
5.将the改为a 考查固定短语"as a result"意为:结果,因此;表示后者是前者的结果(结果可以不止一种);as the result表示特指后句为前句的唯一结果;根据下文可知,此处并非指唯一的结果;故用a
6.在Because之后加of 考查连词because 与复合介词 because of的区别 because of后接名词、代词、动名词、what从句等;because后接句子;由于此处之后跟的是名词the help;故在Because之后加of
7.将returned改为went或者去掉back 考查动词及动词短语的用法 这里的意思是:我返回了学校;固定短语"go back to"意为:回到,返回;根据上文使用了一般过去时可知,此处指的应是Bob在过去野营结束后发生的事情,故用went;另外,return back意为:回归,归还;由于动词"return=go back"意为"回来,返回";故去掉其后的副词back;故答案为:将returned改为went或者去掉
8.将but 改为and 考查连词 本句的意思是:我变得非常活跃,并且结交了新朋友;此处表示并列关系;故用and
9.将admitting改为admitted 考查时态及语态 根据主句"I got a letter that said (我收到一封信说)"使用了一般过去时可知,此处"我被一所大学录取了"应是发生在过去"我收到一封信"之前的动作,所以此处应使用过去完成时;由于主语 I与谓语动词admit构成了被动关系,故此处应使用过去完成时态的被动语态"had been+动词的过去分词";故用admitted
10.将becoming改为 become 考查固定短语"help sb.do sth."意为:.帮助某人做某事;故用become
点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.
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