Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
An old man whose eyesight was failing comes to stay in a hotel, a bottle of whisky in his hand. On the wall was a fly he took for a nail. The moment he tried to hang the bottle on it, they fell and broke. When the landlady discovered what had been happened, she decided to do him favor. The next morning when he was out, the hotel worker hammered a nail exact where the “fly” had been. Before the old man came back, the smell of the whisky reminded him the accident. Looking at the spot what he thought the “fly” was again, he was so angry that he slapped it with all his strengths. On hearing the loud cry, the landlady rushed in. To her surprise, the poor old man was sitting on the floor with his teeth clenched(咬紧) and the palm of his hand bleed.

Answer 1

解析试题分析：文章讲述一个视力不好的人在旅店把一个苍蝇当成钉子，把包挂上去，却掉在地上，第二天房东打了个钉子，他还以为是苍蝇，用手去打，结果把手打破了。
【小题1】come---came   本文的基本时态是一般过去时，这里的came是一个过去时。
【小题2】they--- it      it就是指前面的the bottle，故使用it指代上文的单数名词。
【小题3】been去掉      动词happen没有被动语态的形式，故去掉been。
【小题4】加a            固定搭配do sb a favor帮某人一个人。
【小题5】exact--- exactly  用副词exactly做状语，来修饰整个句子。
【小题6】Before--- When  本句是指当老人回来的时候，酒的味道让他想起了这个事故。
【小题7】加of; 固定搭配remind sb of sth让某人想起某事；
【小题8】what--- where   本句是一个定语从句，先行词是the spot，后面的定语从句句中很完整就使用where引导。
【小题9】strengths---- strength 名词strength力气是一个不可数名词，没有复数形式。
【小题10】bleed--- bleeding 名词the palm手掌与动词bleed构成主动关系，故使用现在分词在句中作宾语补足语。
考点：考查短文改错