Question

请用英语写一篇100个词左右的短文，记述一件发生在你身上（边）的助人为乐的事迹。要求如下：
1. 描述事情经过；   2. 谈谈你的感想。
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Answer 1

One possible version：
Last Saturday, some of my classmates and I went to the Qiandao lake for some refreshment.  Suddenly I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish thrown about by the visitors. He was apparently having great difficulty collecting some small items, especially cigarette butts. An idea struck me. Why not help him collect litter? Much to my joy, all my classmates agreed and were willing to help. So we worked hard together with the dustman and collected lots of rubbish. Then we parted and waved farewell to the thankful dustman.
Dog-tired as I was, I felt really happy. As the saying goes, helping hands are more sacred than praying lips. I truly believe we’d have a more harmonious society if everybody took action. What a fine deed!

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于记叙文的写作范畴,在写作时要注意记论文的六要素,即时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等,都要在文中给予清楚明白地表达。在叙述事情经过时，要写清事情发生与发展的过程以及事情发生的前因后果等,但是要详略得当,分清主次。同时要注意使用一般过去时来叙述过去发生的事情,而且应使用第一人称。.此外要尽量发挥想象力,使用自己熟悉的词语与句型将其扩展成篇,扩展时要注意要求的字数，防止由于字数不够而引起的扣分。
【亮点说明】文章在结构安排上简单明了,使用两个段落分别讲述发生的事情和自己的感受, 结构清晰,层次分明。作者使用了多种句式使文章语言生动,形象.富于变化,比如疑问句Why not help him collect litter? 让步状语从句Dog-tired as I was,定语从句 As the saying goes,等。.此外谚语helping hands are more sacred than praying lips.和一些高级词汇 refreshment, apparently, struck, farewell parted的使用也是文章的一大亮点,显示了作者词汇的丰富和对词语的准确把握能力..