Question

【题目】假设你是学校英语校刊“Speak0utyourmind”的编辑，最近收到一封署名李华的高三学生来信，信中抱怨：学校最近严格检查晨读的情况，要求学生必须大声朗读；该生认为每位同学有自己的学习方式，早上时间宝贵，应该采用适合自己的方式进行学习，才能收到最佳效果;学校不应该采取统一要求的方式。请你给这位同学回信,就此问题进行疏导，要点如下：

1.肯定晨读的重要性和意义

2.大声朗读的好处(如提高记忆效率:增加学习氛围等,)

3.鼓励该学生排除杂念,大声朗读,从现在做起。

Dear Li Hua,

I am sorry to know that you are upset about morning reading_______________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Richard

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Hua

As an old saying goes an hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.Therefore you are supposed to attach much importance to it if you want to improve your efficiency of study during such critical time.

Reading aloud in the morning is definitely of great benefit to study.To start with reading to oneself aloud just like having an audio recording can improve one’s reading and listening by mixing the audile and visual methods. Besides reading aloud with other classmates may well contribute to the good learning atmosphere which will in turn lift up one’s spirits thus making one progress in study.

All in all what you should do right now is to focus on you study getting rid of all the distracting thoughts.Read aloud from onw on and you’re sure to achieve your amazing goal.

【解析】试题分析：试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文要点如下：1.肯定晨读的重要性和意义2.大声朗读的好处(如提高记忆效率:增加学习氛围等,)3.鼓励该学生排除杂念,大声朗读,从现在做起。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。

【亮点说明】

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