Question

最近你所在的学校选出一男一女两名学生作为学校的形象大使，希望他们可以成为其他学生学习的模范。为此学生中展开了激烈的争论。请你根据下列提示，以“Do we need image ambassadors?” 为题给某英语报纸写一篇文章。
注意：1. 词数: 120左右。2. 词汇： image ambassador 形象大使。
3. 短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 
　　Recently my school has chosen a boy and a girl to be its image ambassadors and hopes that others can learn from the two model students.
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Answer 1

Recently my school has chosen a boy and a girl to be its image ambassadors and hopes that others can learn from the two model students. There is a heated debate among the students on this issue.
Some students think that an image ambassador can set a good example for all the other students and inspire all of them. What’s more, in order to be an image ambassador, everyone will try their best to get rid of their bad habits and pay more attention to their appearance and develop their abilities. However, other students hold different views. They believe a person’s inner qualities play a more important role in their life. Besides, each student’s unique style should be appreciated. They are also worried that some students may pay too much attention to their appearance.
As far as I am concerned, image ambassadors can’t set up a standard image for all of the students to follow. As a student, we shouldn’t place too much importance on image. Instead, the students’ abilities should be the most important thing to consider.

试题分析：本篇写作是开放式的作文，只有话题，没有要点，要学生结合说明自己确定提纲，题材是对形象大使的两种不同观点。这种文章一般层次比较清晰，有总述；正方观点和反方观点以及自己观点。要注意的是1.在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2.自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维。一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思。考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力。考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯。尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化。适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。
【亮点说明】文章观点明确，条理清晰，句式富有变化：Some students think that an image ambassador can set a good example for all the other students and inspire all of them. 这句话用了set a good example for“为,….树立榜样”，in order to be an image ambassador, everyone will try their best to get rid of their bad habits and pay more attention to their appearance and develop their abilities.这句话用了不定式做目的状语，They believe a person’s inner qualities play a more important role in their life.这句话用了play an important role起着一个重要的作用。image ambassadors can’t set up a standard image for all of the students to follow.这句话用了不定式做定语， 还有文章还使用了What’s more, However, Besides, As far as I am concerned,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。