Question

假设你是李华，是某校高一新生。来到新的学校后，你要给父母写一封100字左右的英文信，向父母说明这里的情况。内容如下：

1.你的学校是一所历史悠久的名校，校园环境优美，教师经验丰富，教室宽敞明亮，教学设备（teaching equipment）先进，图书馆有大量的藏书。你对这一切都很满意。

2.自己已经养成了晨练的习惯。

注意1.词数100左右。2.信件格式已为你给出,不计入总词数。3.请在答题卡上作答。

Dear parents,

I am very happy to study in my new beautiful school, which is famous and has a long history.  ...   ....

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

LiHua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear parents,

I am very happy to study in my new beautiful school, which is famous and has a long history. We have many experienced teachers who are kind and easy-going. There are many bright classrooms with a lot of advanced teaching equipment. In the school library, there are a large number of books we can borrow.

By the way, I have developed the habit of morning exercise. I get up at 6:30 every morning, and do morning exercise on the playground till 7:00.So please don’t worry about me.

How is everything going with both of you? Miss you very much and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours truly,

LiHua

【解析】

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。