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4．假如你是李华，请你用英语给某报纸的编辑写一封信，介绍你校学生会组织的一个活动．内容如下：

活动目的	为了更好地利用学习资料
活动组织者	学校学生会
活动时间	6月10日～20日
活动地点	校图书馆一楼
活动内容	倡议高三年级同学在毕业之际捐出用过的书等，赠给低年级同学．
活动意义	1、活动得到老师们的支持和夸奖 2、该活动增进友谊，鼓励节约
个人看法	个人支持活动，并希望这样的活动以后还能继续开展下去

[写作内容]
[写作要求]
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总句数．
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯．
参考词汇：增进promote　鼓励节约encourage economy
Dear editor，
I am a student of Senior Three in a middle school in Guangdong Province．
Inorder that we can make the best of learning materials，the Students'Union of our school is arranging anactivity，which will be held on the first floor ofthe school library from June 10 to 20．We studentsof Senior Three are called on to give away our used books，newspapers or magazines to the students in the lowergrades．The idea，which isintended for promoting friendship and encouraging economy，is highly praised and supported by the teachers andstudents alike．As a student，I am strongly for the activity because it is verymeaningful and helpful．
I hope that this kind ofactivity will continue in the future．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提纲类"形式，根据文章所给提示信息写一封信，介绍学校组织的一个活动的情况．写作要点：1．活动目的；2．活动组织者；3．活动时间；4．活动地点；5．活动内容；6．活动意义7．个人看法． 既是提纲作文又是图表类作文．
写作时时态以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．
重要短语：makethe best of （利用），arrange sth（安排某事），call on （号召），give away （捐赠），be intended for （目的是），be for （支持），in order that（为了），promote friendship（增进友谊）．
【高分句型】
1．the Students'Union of our school is arranging an activity，which will be held on the first floor of the school library from June 10 to 20．
这里是which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在定语从句作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
2．The idea，which is intended for promoting friendship and encouraging economy，is highly praised and supported by the teachers and students alike．
这里是which引导的非限制性定语从句，先行词是the idea，which在定语从句中作主语．整个句子的主语是the idea，谓语动词是is praised and supported．

解答 Dear editor，
 I am a student of Senior Three in a middleschool in Guangdong Province．
Inorder that we can make the best of learning materials，（活动目的）the Students'Union of our school is arranging an activity，which willbe held on the first floor of the school library from June 10 to 20．【高分句型】（活动组织者、活动时间、活动地点）Westudents of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books，newspapers or magazines to the students in the lowergrades．（活动内容）The idea，which isintended for promoting friendship and encouraging economy，is highly praised and supported by the teachers andstudents alike．【高分句型】（活动意义） As a student，I am strongly for the activity because it is verymeaningful and helpful．（个人看法）
I hope that this kindof activity will continue in the future．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

点评 写好这类图表及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．